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Tuesday, July 17, 2012

The Wings That Bleed

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The pen that struts of my feelings,
Carries along a pompous lie,
Because my ambitions are mashed by perpetual thoughts,
And thus, the wings that bleed, can never fly.

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14 comments:

Purple Mist said...

Profound! I hadn't read something worthwhile since quite some time.. And along came this post :)

Archetypes India said...

How true!

Nik said...

@Purple Mist Thank You! Would love you to read more and spot my blog with your reviews! :P :)

@Archetypes India Oh yes it is! Thank You for commenting! :) Would like to hear from you!

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Mukta said...

Thanks Nik for stopping by my blog. Sorry your comment was deleted by mistake. Hopefully you will be able to find some quick and easy recipes.

Nik said...

@Mukta No probs! Btw, I need a special recipe! Should I tell here or your blog!!?

Saru Singhal said...

Stunning!

I wish it soars high shedding all the inhibitions!

Loved it!

Nik said...

@saru Thank you! :) I so wish that too!!

Sohini said...

Nice lines!
'The wings that bleed' shall fly high! :)

Nik said...

@Sohini
Thank You!! :) I wish it soars high soon! :)

Tweety said...

Sigh....

When our own thoughts prevent us from flying, u have to let them loose before u forget to fly...

Its beautiful :)

Divenita said...

I loved the first line and the last. Could have bettered the second and the third. Personal thoughts.

Keep writing!

Nik said...

Thanks Divenita! And I like your name! What does it mean?

TTT said...

loved it ! touches the heart ..I hope it soars higher and higher and higher

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